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Sunday, January 4, 2009

...fox and biscuit

"It was a Fox, a huge bloody Fox!" Sally exclaimed.

"Cat. And don't swear." Jen coldly retorted, unmoved by the protestation.

"Fox! It was huge, really massive." she pointed out of the window; the morning dew sitting undisturbed on the grass.

"Bet you it was the ginger tom from down the road, bet you a Bourbon biscuit." Jen had lifted the lid from the biscuit tin, such was her confidence. The loss of a beloved Bourbon caused baby sister Sally to think twice. Was it really a fox that was rummaging through the bins at such an unearthly hour? In the dim light she was now not so sure.

"Hmm...well if it was a cat it looked a lot like a fox." Sally conceded.

"You're just saying that so you don't lose a biscuit! You know it was a cat, you're such a little drama queen, Sal!"

At that precise moment a rather large, beefy but fluffy looking ginger cat appeared on a fence at the bottom of the garden. With consummate grace on the cold wood the furry feline strode along purposefully with the poise of a ballerina.

"Cat!" Jen jabbed at Sally with one hand and pointed to the cat with the other.

"Fox. That's a different fox." Sally mumbled in defeat whilst flicking crumbs of a secretly stolen biscuit from her nightdress.

With a triumphant smile at her younger sister, Jen helped herself to the last grabbed Bourbon biscuit in the tin.

This post has 4 comments

POSTED BY ROSE ON SUNDAY, JANUARY 4, 2009...

Punchy... I like it :-) and you get a sense of them very quickly without too much describing... I demand more writing!!!

POSTED BY LINDS ON SUNDAY, JANUARY 4, 2009...

very good...back to your skilled self xxxx

POSTED BY CAROLINE ON TUESDAY, JANUARY 6, 2009...

More please!!

POSTED BY DEBBIE ON TUESDAY, JANUARY 6, 2009...

Agree with Rose - a good punchy monologue no less!

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